It's been awhile since I posted. I started a new job (yay me) but it has made it a little bit harder to work on my writing. But the important thing is that I have a job and able to help my family more. Although I love my writing, it's not something that's going to pay the bills each month :-(
I did have a great friend edit book two and after mulling over everything, I have decided to re-write about 13 of the chapters(the book has 24 chapters total so it's over half the book) so it's going to be a work in progress kind of thing. It's kind of heart wrenching opening a file and seeing so much red but it's something I didn't have for book one so it's all good. The important thing is that she was able to catch a lot of simple errors and some of the story structure issues as well.